Talk:Th128/Endings/en

I've just played through the game with this translation, and many sentences of the ending (A1 route) were too long and couldn't properly be displayed ingame (lines #0@5, #0@8 and #0@10). For #0@5, I suggest throwing some of the stuff with the previous line, e.g.

0@4 Firstly... I'll make a mess

0@5 while they're watching the cherry blossoms!

No idea how to improve on the two other lines yet. If people don't have problems with my suggestion for #0@5, I may try to improve some other endings the same way. --Kelovar (talk) 04:47, 25 August 2013 (UTC)

The main problem here was the fact that Cirno's lines were also indented by the width of Three Fairies of Light. I changed it to just Fairies now to save a bit of space, and inserted a line break on #0@8. --NamelessLegacy (talk) 10:21, 25 August 2013 (UTC)